Chain Writing

It was a dark stormy night. I  was on the way back home from the library which was far away from my house. Then I heard a howling sound. I looked around and nothing was there. I kept walking. Then I tripped over something. It was rectangular stone next to me.There was a lighting and I saw what it said on the stone. It said '1923 Alexander Machingove'. It was a grave. I also saw a very old mansion.

 I was so scared, so I ran , but tripped on this stupid rock. DING~DONG the clock stroked twelve. I got up and kept on running and I turned around to see if anything was there but something was really fallowing me. I stopped to have a better look. It stopped too. It looked like a disabled man with glowing eyes. Then I ran fro my life again. In the middle of the nigh chased by a wicked man.  I was out of energy. I stopped and the man wasn't even 3feet away from me. he started saying "Where is my baby?" 

I was taken so taken back. I thought this man was going to hurt me of worse, KIDNAP ME!!!! I staggered. "I.....i...i..d-don't...k..n.o....w........" . Then man tilted his head . His voice changed when he asked em again. "Then where is my baby?" His eyes were literary glowing now. I feel like fainting. His hand slowly went into his pocket and I wish I didn't look at it but I saw a sharp blade coming out of that pocket.

I screamed my head off, but then the man disappeared. 'Where did he go?' I thought to my self. 'Did I just imagine him?' I thought again. But the blade was still on that place. But no owner. Shivering with fear I jogged back to my home. As I climbed into bed, a shiver went up my spine. Why was there suddenly a cold breeze inside my room. I yelled out in horror. There he was, that creepy old man again. As the approached me, I noticed one detail i had not seen before. There appeared to be a
ruby on his neck. I gulped. I suddenly remembered a book I read before. In that book, the main character pushed the ruby and the men disappeared. I wanted to see what happens. So I took a deep breath and pushed it hard. Just when he was about to stab my throat, he was gone. I was now

flabbergasted and astounded. However, the most significant thing is that I survived. I was relived, and just slept on the floor. I was suddenly transported to a room with.... nothing. The only word that could describe this room was emptiness. I could only see the door. Abruptly, I heard a creepy, scary voice. "I want to play a game." said a man. It seemed that he appeared from nowhere. He was short, and wearing a black tuxedo. His ribbon below his neck was -

"WHO ARE YOU?" I screamed. Covered with hands. His face was covered with a mask that resembled a ghost. "My name is Jigsaw. A.K.A Alexander Machingove. Your father killed me 35years ago in 1978. It started with a skirmish but bigger and bigger until he finally stabbed me with a fragment of glass." said Jigsaw. "WHAT?!" I screamed.

"Yes, Jason, you must accept the truth. And I will have revenge." smiled Jigsaw. He took a fragment of glass from his tuxedo. "Now I can rest in peace."  smiled Jigsaw. Then "AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA-----------!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"

Reflective essay (Spring, Summer, Autumn,Winter and Spring)

This is a video about a little monk and a grown up monk living in a temple in the middle of the pond and the grown up trying to teach lessons to the little monk. The little monk went the the mountains and tied rocks to the fish and the frog and the snake. Then the grown up monk saw it and the next morning there was a rock tied to the little monks body. The big monk said that if you go and find all the animals you tied rocks to and let them free I will let you free. That's when the little monk learnt his first lesson death.

I figured death when my dad's mother died. My grandmother died. I was young at that time but I actually say her body put in to the coffin. I really cried a lot. But I was about 7 or 6 at that time but because every one was crying I cried with them but I knew that grandmother loved me a lot and we went to see her every Sunday but every time I went to her house I only saw my grandfather, not my grandmother and that continued until I found out one day that my grandmother was never coming back to me and I won't be able to see her again ever again. It made me cry just then, 3month after her death. now some times I really regret how I did to her, my attitude to her when she was soooo kind to me and cared about me.

Now a days i really sometimes when I'm so sad or very angry I think about her and wish she was next to me and hugging me. I think that would make every worry or anger go away. Some times when I think about her tears drop from my eyes and through my cheeks very heavily...That was when I first figured what death was.

Terry Deary is not a good writer!!

Hello, My name is Yurim Hong as you all know and you might not know about Terry Deary. He is a English writer and he wrote the series 'Horrible Histories'. I will tell you why he is a bad wirter. It's because Terry Deary wrote that Korea is cruel and eats dogs. But we really don't do that and as a Korean reader it is very annoying. Also he said that all visitors from outer Koreans to bow down to Kim Jung Ill and we have a statue of him and he meant all North Korea and South Korea when he doesn't know about us! If he wants to write about us at least have to know about the specific details about us but he wrote it with no clear information which most Koreans will think if they read it . Again as a Koren reader it is sort of annoying. In these two books I read.

Avril Lavigne

This is one of my favorite singer and song. Avril Lavigne has very many favorite song of hers. These two songs are the most funniest music video in terms of her movies. Also my sister really likes her, she has a bunch of songs from her. She said she really wants to meet her if she can... I would like you listen to these music and leave a comment what you think about the song. But no negative comments please.^*^

My Poo Speech

How many time do you fart a day? How many time do you poo a week?
Hello, my name is Yurim Hong and I'm gong to talk about something disgusting and something very weird something that you people don't know mush about, fart and poo. Lots of people just think that fart and poo is just dirty and smelly. But I'm going to get this right and tell interesting stuff about fart and poo.

First if the sound of the fart is loud, then that means get ready to run for your lives because most of the people around me does that. Again if there is no sound when some one farts there will be dead fish smell vibrating. Now I will tell you about 5 things that some people during farting or before farting. NO.1 Some people raise one side of their but before they fart, that means you have time to run away from that person. NO.2 Some people fart and run away. NO.3 Some people fart as they take a step. NO.4 For example your in a department store, Hyundai department store. There is 10,000 people or more. But they don't even care and fart and everyone looks at you. NO.5 Some people fart and stay still and blame the others because you are embarrassed. Do you do that? 

Did you also know that if you don't fart when you have to or want to then it's not good for your health? That's because every food contains air and that air is mixed with dirty and clean air and that mixed air is coming out as what we call fart. Also people with so perfect everything like perfect lungs and hearts have to fart 25times a day. If you didn't know that then you have to start eating salad, fruit and also very important milk and cheese.

Poo is also disgusting. It's worse than fart but it's very important to people. If we don't poo, all the disgusting left over stuffs from your precious body won't be able to come out. If you are very healthy than you should poo once a day and it has to be the colour of the food you ate or the colour of the pine tree's trunk, or a bit lighter. Because there is a liquid which digests your food and the yellowy brownish colour comes from there. Also the length of the poo has to be longer than 7cm because if it's 3cm or 4cm long then that means your poo is very hard and it snaps easily. So you have to eat lactobacillus. 

Does anyone fart as I told you? Maybe you can have a try finding your own habit or other people's. For example like  you poo when you wake up or after dinner. I wish you enjoyed my speech. Thank you and have a nice day. ^*^

Kony 2012 is it good or bad??

Every one, have you heard about Joseph Kony? The top criminal on the world's list? he is a criminal who kidnaps the children and forces them to kill their own parents by creating a children army. Just to gain power, lots of kids are suffering. Therefore in 2012the American government is getting involved to capture Joseph Kony. In 2012the Invisible children organization is trying to make Kony famous. but not in a good way but so that people know how bad and cruel he is. They are trying to make Kony famous by putting a video of him on the Internet and it's called 'Kony 2012'. People made Kony famous by telling each other about Kony, watching videos with each other and this video really made lots of people cry. They also by selling a kit which has lots of things about Kony 2012. Also by donating money through TRI every month, you can get a kony 2012 kit for free.But I think all this Kony 2012 and making Kony famous isn't good.


If people donate money through TRI  70% of the money will be kept by Jason Russell the maker of the video on the top, and only 30% of the money will maybe go to Africa to Uganda. Also I think the video is a bi exaggerating, as many Ugandan people don't like it. When the video was shown in a small village in Uganda, the people who watched the video started throwing rocks on the screen because they said that Kony was not the most important problem.

But on the other hand, this making Kony famous movement is a good idea, because then all the kids captured will be free and maybe have a chance the live happily like Jacob. Jason's friend from the children army, Jacob's brother was murdered because he tried to escape, and Jacob saw that happening and he said if he could just see his brother once again there would be no wish, and he said if he just died maybe he would see his brother in heaven. Just like Jacob many people lost their homes, hopes and families.

So this is the bad and good reason about 'Kony 2012'. Do you think it's a good idea trapping kids, not letting them live their life? Children are humans who hope they are going to grow up and be the ones who will continue the world. Again ever other people say no there are more good than bad and really the invisible children should be free to do what ever they want and this Kony capturing movement should succeed and Joseph Kony will never do that again just to gain his power? That's nonsense. That can't be a reason to kidnap a children army.

Ode to Wind

Dear Wind

you are very very special and natural; you are very cool and make my sweat go away. we can also get electricity from you. Wind is a very helpful thing. Air conditioner and fans go by wind and it helps us. Have you ever thought hwo special you are??

If you didn't, I'll help you. you make my sweat and heat go away and make me very relaxed. I wish I had you everywhere, and you are. I can use you to make sound with instruments. I really like the way you swish around the bamboo trees; I feel so happy.
Wind instruments use you to make sound. Almost every thing in the world needs you to work; really, many things need you to activate. You give us lots of help; for example, you blow and make the kites fly and sometimes birds needs your help to fly; the grasses dance when you blow and people's attitude changes as you fly.

I think you truly are a great help to us, and one day probably more people will know how great a help you are to us, humans. Thank you wind for every thing you've given us.